Friday, 29 March 2019
Pig the Pug.
Pig the pug fell out the window so he went to hospital.It was quiet at the hospital.The Hospital was so cleaned and bright and the doctors and nurses were so helpful. the doctor said "what happened ?" He lied the doctor and said" Trevor Pushed me out of the window. Trevor said" No I did not Push him out of the window".Trevor was sad and mad. Trevor came up with a good plan. he showed the doctor the Video. The doctor showed the Video to the police. The Police were thinking what they could do. so that Trevor plan could work.Pig the Pug went to the Police.
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Hi Felix!
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you had described the hospital in your writing, it helped me to picture what the hospital looked like. Maybe next time, you could fix up your grammar a bit so your writing is easier to read and more interesting for the readers :)