Hello Felix, I am Sione from Room 6. I like how you've used simple words to describe the stars. Maybe you could add a bit more though. Even though it had very few words, I loved your poem.
Hii Felix, I really enjoyed your painting. I liked how you made a acrostic poem and how you mixed two different colours to make your own.Maybe next time you could use brighter colours to make it bright,other than that keep up the good work. Tali
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ReplyDeleteI am Sione from Room 6. I like how you've used simple words to describe the stars. Maybe you could add a bit more though. Even though it had very few words, I loved your poem.
Hii Felix,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your painting. I liked how you made a acrostic poem and how you mixed two different colours to make your own.Maybe next time you could use brighter colours to make it bright,other than that keep up the good work.
Tali
thank you for the comment tali. But we couldn't use bright.
DeleteHi tali it me Felix from Room 8 I like that you have enjoyed my painting and my acrosctic poem thank you for the comment to my painting
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