WALT: How to write an explanation.
Room 8 have learnt the structure of an explanation and have been practising writing explanations in class. We wrote about how to make a new friend and then turned it into a presentation to put onto our individual blogs. I turned my explanation into a slide show.
Friday, 2 June 2017
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Hi Felix, It is me Jaedun Good Idea of using Thor and Hulk you could work on putting more detail in the background and would Thor see Hulk and want to become friends.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your pictures of hulk and thor and it was funny of hulk breaking his swing maybe you can work your font size
Hi Felix
ReplyDeleteIt's me Lui I like how your Idea of how to make a friend it's funny how you used Hulk and Thor when Hulk broke the swing it reminds me of when I broke a chair when I was playing on it.Good job keep it up.
Hey Felix it's Micah I like how you put in some laughs in your slideshow. The be part about your slidehow was when hulk broke the swing. Great job Felix keep it up.
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