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Monday, 6 May 2019

WALT... Write a Character desc ription Use ‘show not tell’ in our writing

WALT... Write a Character desc ription Use ‘show not tell’ in our writing


Trevor - is wide with a long body and has short legs. He is like a long fat sausage. Trevor has a snout and nostrils that make a snorting noise he has a small nose. Trevor smells like a ball and stinky wet socks. Trevor has a small face and big floppy ears. Trevor- is a kind dog . Trevor - let pig treat him unfair. Trevor - speak like he want to join and share Trevor - he want a friend Trevor - is not a bad dog and pig used him. Trevor - is a forgiving dog. Trevor - is a helpful dog and he help pig. Trevor - doesn't get angry at pig.

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